Scribbles and bits 100- My brains rant

Thoughts and feelings

Swirling through my mind

Spinning violently

As my anger grows

I try to be there

For you

I try to care

But you

Make it so hard

Don’t you know how

Difficult it was for me to let my Guard


And yet you just take advantage of my trust

And expect me not to frown

Don’t you know you have crushed


Don’t you know how much I have gone through

Can’t you see

That all I ever wanted from you was the truth but you still

Feel as though you need to lie

Which fills

My heart with sorrow and makes me want to cry.

I want to scream

I want to shout

I want to let the words stream


I want to run

I want to flee

My anger has been overcome.

I’ve give up so much for you

And you don’t care

You ask me to do

Even more for you to the point that I can’t bear

Looking at myself anymore

If I agree

I just want to drop to the floor

And yell why me? 

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Comments (6)

  1. pastormike

    powerful work. barely controlled.. but controlled. fiery…

    July 12, 2014
    1. proudmomma8

      Thank you

      July 13, 2014
  2. SEC

    July 13, 2014
    1. proudmomma8

      Thank you

      July 13, 2014
  3. cameronclegg

    This painting is too much beautiful I can’t see that type of painting in anywhere you are such a great artist. Your poem is also good and I think you copy this poem in online essay writing service reviews because I am read this poem in here, this poem is match your painting.

    January 02, 2017